[Breifne Lenore] Grand Mage bio {approved}

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[Breifne Lenore] Grand Mage bio {approved}

Post by Guest on Sun Jun 07, 2009 12:53 pm

Screenname: Bahamut

Name: Breifne Lenore

Gender: Female

Age: 120 looking only 25

Race: Human

Class: Grand Mage

Element: Water and Wind
Abilities:
Water: Suffocate, Drown, Healing Rains, Tsunami, Hurricane
Wind: Tornado, Winds Of Zephyr, Wall of Wind, Sandstorm, Disaster Zone


Weaknesses: Is afraid of thunder and lightning.

Appearance: Breifne likes to wear robes, she is slim and very attractive, despite her age. Breifne has long blonde hair and blue eyes and is 5'7".

Personality: Breifne is very easy going, she does not anger very easily but her temper can flare at times.

History: Breifne was an aspiring Mage specialising in the Water Element, she excelled at this for a very long time and a few years ago she was given the rank of Grand Mage where she was able to learn a new element. The element of her choice was Wind. She based this choice on her higher level skill that she learned for becoming a Grand Mage.

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Re: [Breifne Lenore] Grand Mage bio {approved}

Post by Tidus on Sun Jun 07, 2009 12:58 pm

There is only one problem i have with this Bio, and that is the History, if your character is infact 120 years old, then you should put a bit more effort into your History, going back further than a couple of years. other than that it's good, but for now

BLOOP ADMIN EDIT


I have discussed it with Freddy and he is going to thread the history. He appologizes that it is lacking but hell look at mine Smile

So approved

_ Jack Harkness

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Re: [Breifne Lenore] Grand Mage bio {approved}

Post by Captain Jack on Sun Jun 07, 2009 9:58 pm

Abuses admin powers a tad.... Approved on grounds that it has been discussed with Me ... BUT YE BETTER THREAD THAT HISTORY YO GOTS IT.....


HAHAH Cheers we look forward to your posts



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